Qryos

Sitting within the darkness of ourselves it could be resounding within shadows a truth that may outlast all tomorrows. It may be future-bound to taint the years and so connect and soflty redirect all those unneeded unwanted fears. Living now deeply within may be a truth that stays hidden unproven and not yet brightly envisioned .

~ Lovely imagery, Thank you!

~ Thank you everyone! I appreciate that Flower It's a syllabic poem so maybe? I touch the burnt and bloody wings of angels ground into the sweaty streets and wish for Heaven's rains... I touch the torn and shattered ghosts that gather to pluck the broken feathers and wish for Heaven's rains... I touch in hope they may see what has fallen these unseeing eyes that pass and wish for Heaven's rains...

I touch the burnt and bloody wings of angels ground into the sweaty streets and wish for Heaven's rains... I touch the torn and shattered ghosts that gather to pluck the broken feathers and wish for Heaven's rains...

~ Hate to tell ya this Hon... That's really poorly done then! ... Thank you for making me laugh! A Vogon would never have used 'wafting'... That's not a Vogonish poetry word, now is it? & over-all the entire effort is much too short. & you had rhythm!!! {I know, when ya got it, just can't lose it, huh? } You just lost the first assimilation round of the Vogon poetathlon. If you are to apply to enter the poetathlon next year, you must file the proper forms and be sure of the appropriate length of your submission. Complete all forms in triplicate and do not neglect proper approval signatory. All forms must be filed in the assigned reporting department exactly 365 days prior to the date of the event. Failure to do so will automatically cause a default of the presumed entrance fee. If such fee is not provided 367 days before the poetathlon begins you shall be fined that amount plus 3x for filing and processing fees.

... For you Rainbow! And so He comforts When you only see darkness And your heart is lost You never are lost However deep the darkness And so He comforts

~ Oh MY!!! Pensiswhatsis obviously... & most marvelously done!

There's always iron grey skies that hover and constrain What? What ever you contain that slip past your silent sighs. There's always that steely shore to coldly keep at bay Why? Why is it every day you find something to abhore. There's gold deep within your mind it shimmers bright within When? When will you then begin To forge the path you refined.

~ Great question! I'd say, 'The Question'. Questing & seeking the answer, of whatever & wherever. That's cool.

now why would you stop? like a squirrel with bushy tail you're cute when you're nuts!

~ Rainbow does magic! iambic pentameter in a haiku poem {OK, yeah, I did cheat & do cheap... } Ah jeesh, my teacher would frown and disown this as not true haiku perhaps senryu? nope, I'm off the beaten path he'd say I'm lost haiku's really hard when you stay to the order! I enjoy this form

~ Ah, thank you Oscar!

~ Whooo... Evidently the 'haiku' area is resuscitated, huh? So on this one day There's so many ways to say How much I love you... But to make it true... I'll work on those ways to say It's not just one day I LOVE YOU

~ What? Like it's not obvious yarmin & Karmina should meet? Caffein or alcohol, looks like a wonderful conversation! I do appologise if I offend! I just do so enjoy wonderful conversations

~ Welcome Oscar! & what's your dark psy? ~ Wow Plurge... That's dedication! Or complusion. Either way, definately sorta nifty!

~ A request for love poetry? {I do so enjoy requests! Tho' you've gotten such wonderful stuff already... } I have found my life With your love I am complete Forever as one Hmmm... You perhaps want rhyming stuff? I have found my love The one that fits like a glove Forever and ever my gift from above! ... & then ya write a bit like 'Forever, Snookums' or whatever your personal stuff is... {Ya gotta make it personal.}

~ Great post Yarvin! Thank you Lots of thoughts.

~ OK! yes I play with friends late at night with smokes and beer on my computer simply enjoying conversation and debate so I stay up late ~ turn {Just one for you } falling too swiftly catching every branch there is landing is a bitch ... Just a thought Hon!

snow drifts on the fence patterns tripping down the slope rabbits visit here a dead cherry tree draped with snow and pogonip robins still find rest {pogonip is frozen ice, more delicate than icycles, caused by freezing fog.}

~ That's a really good post turns! Thank you. That cry or scream or whimper for help needs to be heard. Those without hope of anything but pain should be allowed to gently die with dignity when & how they wish. ... & since I'm a fat smoking alcoholic, I can't really reply to the last part

~ Oh yeah! Blues Traveler I've only a lowly dial-up connection tho' so can't enjoy your links {Well, if I had the patience for it I could, but I don't so I can't.} Y'know, everyone I've played Redd Nexx for has loved it... It's funny how addictive it is, huh?

We swimmm... Within this dim shrouding cloud and have found Such a burning yearning to learn in bright un-sighted light... The seams gleaming - BEAM - Visions of divisive decisions... Endless revisions enchanting and implanting extant Realities... Morality modularity so entertaining; Restraining, containing our soul's tolls bringing stinging ringing ... Until the thrill chills and Heaven calls the Fall

~ What rich imagery... Thank You!

~ Thanx Hon! Iambic pentameter... yeah, OK. Understood. Just wondering why in the world would you use such a strong imagery to do that in a short example? Hell, Shakespeare took fricken pages for one such image! You challenge yourself crazy-style... I like it!

~ I just read your replies to my stuff & I appreciate your reading & comments very much! Thank you