Qryos

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  1. ~ I'm even worse Darlin! Dark water reflecting soft white petals nibbled on by fancy fish Fish fancy by on nibbled petals white soft reflecting water dark Fancy fish nibbled on by soft white petals reflecting dark water water dark reflecting petals white soft by on nibbled fish fancy ... Hey, if you thought that was a translation from another language, you'd go, "Wooo!" Huh? {& y'know, with some effort, it's doable any-ole way... Fine. I'll work on it. *snort*}
  2. ~ Yep Darlin, it's one of 'those' picnics! Pick a place beneath a tree sweet as summer tea to lay with me... You've found the place my lady so soft and shady to play with me... So now we whisper sweetly touching discreetly Yipes! There's a bee!
  3. ~ Just had a thought about the original topic, sorry to interrupt... If humans weren't allowed to intentionally harm themselves with poor choices, how would they learn & mature? Poor love choice {heart-ache! Do better next time} drinking too much {hang-over! Do better next time} bankruptcy {you're screwed! Do better next time} car accident {you're owied! Do better next time!} ... Well, could go on & on & on, humans are creative critters & often need to repeat lessons, but if they weren't allowed to harm themselves... We'd all have to live in padded rooms. Being fed People Chow. Exercised regularly on a gerbil wheel. {& let's face it, most humans would not make good pets.} ... I know, I barged in & babbled. Continue on!
  4. ~ Yep, I had a thought... Dark water reflecting soft white petals nibbled on by fancy fish
  5. ~ Fred, Hon! You're such an artist...
  6. ~ My husband has a beautiful rose on his shoulder. Didn't start out so pretty tho'! He passed-out on his 18th birthday & a pain-in-the-ass 'friend' tattooed a swastika. {Never saw him again!} A few weeks later husband got busted for drunk-driving & was sentenced to jail... With a swastika? Nooo! So, became a 'window pane'... {drugs go over better in jail than assinine racist crap} When our daughter was born 6 years later he found a tattoo artist that was willing & could cover the ghastly. Very nicely done, can't even see the stupid under it! Now our daughter wants a matching rose. {She already has a few...}
  7. ~ I've lost control... Don't blame me! They're all typing quite happy free. Yep, these topics they now select and what they may or may not erect could be awkward, I won't deny... What else are they gonna do with that pie? Probably something messy.
  8. ~ I've always enjoyed this one! But I can't help it! I gotta!!! {Just a suggestion, ignore it easy. It is your art & your voice! Just line-break suggestions, OK?} ... I know, I'm awful.
  9. ~ I get weird stuff when I'm asleep, OK? Started as armour, protection tough and strong. A glisten here, a fancy there, just went on too long. Now very stained windows with vaulted heights inside {just added a belfrey for the bats to reside} It's a frickin' cathedral of stone I've built and I'm so alone. Forgot the damn doors... {Tho' I do like the way it ends, sorta slammed shut... Fits.}
  10. ~ That's beautiful Rose! Would you mind? perhaps tears are unspoken words silenced as much in that words are unshed tears. Tears unshed are words that in much as silenced words unspoken are tears perhaps ... I enjoy crafting 'mirror' poetry. You inspired. Thank you!
  11. ~ I like that Phil, nicely done!
  12. ~ Ahhh jeesh people... I'm the Drunk! What, honestly, ya never noticed? Seriously, I've had least 6 beers before I go on-line & the kegerator's right by the comp. I'm a sot. A lush. A drunk. Bel Hon, you can be whatever you want to be! {I would say Horny, but that wouldn't be polite, so I won't. } ~ Thank you Flower! ~ T.V., you are doing marvelously, weaving words in a tapestry that you've never tried before... Keep it up! Encore!
  13. ~ I gotta say, never, ever! In any way on any day did anyone before think of my box that way! ... Thank you Flower! Gimme hugs ~ So, words are turning about and maybe perhaps giving a Shout! Z'okay, all crap needs out... This is so coool... Please, everyone! Play!!! I find this marvelous...
  14. ~ It wasn't written about anyone here... Just a thang, that's all! Glad you all like it
  15. now so softly whispering smooth and slick swiftly with a gentle gliding swaying trick your tongue turned quick to nasty biting hurting sharp to craft again such fighting displaying once again your skill you strike with perfect timing diving in to confirm the kill to see if the pain's still chiming hurting sharp to craft again such fighting your tongue turned quick to nasty biting swiftly with a gentle gliding swaying trick now so softly whispering smooth and slick
  16. ~ Playing in my monster box? {Phil, I know what you're thinking! Don't you even...} Such wonderfully powerful work! Look at what beauty you've both created Don't ever be afraid of any word you know. Embrace every one & know that each has its place. You have that image, you have that emotion. That is yours to express... It's your art & soul & heart, that truly YOU part you display whether joy or dismay, it's your voice, your choice, go ahead & play! {Just as an aside thing... I've worked with poets to get them published. Just editing assistance. If anyone wants such, just P.M. me. I work free for friends }
  17. ~ I've created a monster! ... Continue oh my beast! Craft & craft some more! You're doing marvelously! Really!!! Play with it... Let it pour forth!
  18. ~ And so friends sigh... A good sigh! Not a cry, it's a fine friend to depend upon when too deep & can't find sleep & need is found profound in a voice.
  19. ~ WoW! Guess I sorta opened a slue, huh? Please! Continue!!! Great stuff!
  20. Watch what words you say for what you spout can be used another day it's a crappy dance used to entrance and crap can fertilize before you realize the thoughts of others just for bothering a simple spot not something truly caught or bought by discussion just the past regurgitated yep Surprise! this day it's once again in play.
  21. ~ Good grief Lachy, had to go back to the first page for that! That a problem? Yes, I have written some 'salty' stuff Sweat on me let me taste your body within without complete this beast together unleashed roaring together
  22. ~ Just a note. A short bit to say nothing much. Well, you know... That I love & miss you & such... Just a note. Just a fast shot Bad aim may have hit you? It is a random ramble... So are ya caught? Feeling it may be true? Poetry is a gamble...
  23. ~ You always make me envision! That could be my Ideal, ... That sounds good