lifeslittleuturns Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Joy and happinessWhen you first see your newbornPurely from the heart Link to post Share on other sites
lifeslittleuturns Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Falling satelliteDefense department "SNAFU"Why buses don't fly Link to post Share on other sites
Qryos Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 snow drifts on the fencepatterns tripping down the sloperabbits visit herea dead cherry treedraped with snow and pogoniprobins still find rest{pogonip is frozen ice, more delicate than icycles, caused by freezing fog.} Link to post Share on other sites
RevRainbow Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Midnight coughing spell.Cigarettes doing their workwithin my black lungs.Coffee cup empty!Waiting for percolationis grounds for divorce. Link to post Share on other sites
Qryos Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 ~ OK! yes I play with friendslate at night with smokes and beeron my computersimply enjoyingconversation and debateso I stay up late~ turn {Just one for you }falling too swiftly catching every branch there islanding is a bitch... Just a thought Hon! Link to post Share on other sites
rev.daniel Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Can you think of a poem I can give to my wife for V-day? Link to post Share on other sites
lifeslittleuturns Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Can you think of a poem I can give to my wife for V-day? Delicate beautyThe mother of my childrenBe mine, Valentine Link to post Share on other sites
lifeslittleuturns Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Flowers and candyflowing around, sea of redit is you I love Link to post Share on other sites
RevRainbow Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 How can I tell youdeep thoughts in my heart and soulin just a few words? Link to post Share on other sites
lifeslittleuturns Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Those afraid to swimshould stay in the shallow endwhile in the gene poolblowing trees drop leavespixels of color on groundbrisk chill in the air Link to post Share on other sites
Qryos Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 ~ A request for love poetry? {I do so enjoy requests! Tho' you've gotten such wonderful stuff already... }I have found my lifeWith your love I am completeForever as oneHmmm... You perhaps want rhyming stuff?I have found my loveThe one that fits like a gloveForever and ever my gift from above!... & then ya write a bit like 'Forever, Snookums' or whatever your personal stuff is...{Ya gotta make it personal.} Link to post Share on other sites
rev.daniel Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 NIICCEE! all of them. Link to post Share on other sites
Samadhi Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 First time alone with a girlAs nervous as a piece of glassIn a child's handAt the used bookstoreIt makes me sad to seeA book that was once a giftGusty autumn windsScattering the leavesMy broom is tired Link to post Share on other sites
lifeslittleuturns Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Intoxicationthe effect of your wilesas our two souls danceI am struck as dumbthoughts of you wash over meinstantly at peaceThe yin to my yangYour the Jane to my TarzanA natural fitAs the years tick byand as our bonds are strengthenedwe are closer stillI savor each breathas you lay here next to meIn peaceful slumberAppreciationof the day that we first metand locked our gazeWith breakfast in bedand massaging of your feetI love pleasing youOnce again I'll askWill you be my Valentineto my better half Link to post Share on other sites
Qryos Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 ~ Whooo... Evidently the 'haiku' area is resuscitated, huh? So on this one dayThere's so many ways to sayHow much I love you...But to make it true...I'll work on those ways to sayIt's not just one day I LOVE YOU Link to post Share on other sites
RevRainbow Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Can one ever useiambic pentameterin a haiku poem? Link to post Share on other sites
lifeslittleuturns Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 Can one ever useiambic pentameterin a haiku poem? If you can find a way to squeeze 10 syllables into 5, and 10 syllables into 7, and 10 syllables into 5. Perhaps if you hire the ENRON accountants to count the syllables. Link to post Share on other sites
lifeslittleuturns Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 If you can find a way to squeeze 10 syllables into 5, and 10 syllables into 7, and 10 syllables into 5. Perhaps if you hire the ENRON accountants to count the syllables.duh, you just used "iambic pentameter" in a haiku poem.Here's my sign. Link to post Share on other sites
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Qryos Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 ~ Rainbow does magic!iambic pentameterin a haiku poem{OK, yeah, I did cheat & do cheap... }Ah jeesh, my teacherwould frown and disown thisas not true haikuperhaps senryu?nope, I'm off the beaten pathhe'd say I'm losthaiku's really hardwhen you stay to the order!I enjoy this form Link to post Share on other sites
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