Rev Karron Posted January 16, 2004 Report Share Posted January 16, 2004 The old bum shivers;a vacancy sign flashes on-offin his neon eyes.From cherry blossomsthe spider climbs down its silk;our love too on a thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OHCowgirl Posted January 16, 2004 Report Share Posted January 16, 2004 Karron, I like this...I wish I understood Haiku better.My only haiku training has come from here...and I always like seeing a thread started...Wait til the Sifu sees this...!!!Thanks for posting, KarronConnie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnE308 Posted January 16, 2004 Report Share Posted January 16, 2004 a voice on the phoneplease deposite more coins nowyour time has run out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator murphzlaw1 Posted January 16, 2004 Administrator Report Share Posted January 16, 2004 five syllables hereseven on the second lineonce again, five more now you know haikuwhere's Sotik and Heaven at?They rock at this stuff.Sotik's going out.Save the world from evil guys.He will not respond.Heaven isn't here.Once in a blue moon, she comes.Maybe she'll pop in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SifuPhil Posted January 16, 2004 Report Share Posted January 16, 2004 Rev. Karron-Beautiful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SifuPhil Posted January 16, 2004 Report Share Posted January 16, 2004 Maybe the old bumIs but a shadow of youthAnd stayed at that place.Memories come backFlooding his stuporous headAh! The good old days.Now he shuffles pastAnd a tear forms in his eye.So many years, gone... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SifuPhil Posted January 16, 2004 Report Share Posted January 16, 2004 Like the spider's silk,Our love hangs by a thin threadDisappears in dew.Like the spider's legs,Mine are spindly and fragileToo weak to climb up.Like the spider's heart,I seek only food and warmthbut settle for love.But just as I eat,I'm caught by a hungry bird -(sigh) - life is like that.I should have sought loveInstead of that juicy fly.I'd still be here now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OHCowgirl Posted January 16, 2004 Report Share Posted January 16, 2004 These are sooooo wonderful you guys...John, it's great to see you posting here...please do more.Phil...I told Karron you'd find this...do I know my Phil or what???I'm pinning this so we don't lose it...Connie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest astroboy69 Posted January 16, 2004 Report Share Posted January 16, 2004 I love winter daysExcept when I have to shovelI pay someone elseCanada wintersIn Manitoba are longPlease send me whiskey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OHCowgirl Posted January 16, 2004 Report Share Posted January 16, 2004 Certainly got your point across Astro...are ya' cold???Connie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest astroboy69 Posted January 17, 2004 Report Share Posted January 17, 2004 (edited) actually it's warmed up a bit to a balmy -14 degrees celciusI wait for whiskeyYet here still not arrivingNo love for me shownCowgirl no haikuMe thinks she should try it outCome on Connie try Edited January 17, 2004 by astroboy69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev Karron Posted January 17, 2004 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2004 Rev. Karron-Beautiful!Thank you Phil. Love your Haiku. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OHCowgirl Posted January 26, 2004 Report Share Posted January 26, 2004 Come on guys....I know there is more Haiku out there...I hate to unpin this because no one is adding to it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tracy Posted January 26, 2004 Report Share Posted January 26, 2004 The ice cream truck callsLike a steel drum pied piperCream whiskers and smiles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev Karron Posted January 27, 2004 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2004 December moonlightsilvers the evergreens,silvers my hair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OHCowgirl Posted January 27, 2004 Report Share Posted January 27, 2004 Karron, Tracy...thank you...Now THAT'S the way it's done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SifuPhil Posted January 28, 2004 Report Share Posted January 28, 2004 Oh...I didn't realize we had to keep adding more. (shuffle, shuffle, scribble, scribble)...give me a few minutes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SifuPhil Posted January 28, 2004 Report Share Posted January 28, 2004 Listening to jazzAs I try to write haiku.Sax is way too loud.Try some new-age stuff...Ah, refreshment for my soul.Damn! I fell asleep.It's rap! Yo Mama!Drink and cuss, make a big fuss.Naw - change the channel.It's Mozart's birthday.Classical might help me write.Pachabel's Canon.One I haven't tried.Turn the damn radio off.Words flow like sweet wine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SifuPhil Posted January 28, 2004 Report Share Posted January 28, 2004 You fell for my mask.Didn't see the real man there.Misunderstandings.Pulled the mask aside,And you looked at me and said,"That's not who I love".Seven hundred daysdied, and then you thought to say,"It's YOU that I love".Now my pile of masksSits at curbside - so much junk.Won't wear them again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OHCowgirl Posted January 28, 2004 Report Share Posted January 28, 2004 Oooooh. Phil....those were wonderful...and of course you must keep adding more...how will I ever learn to write this stuff if you don't??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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