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flashing yellow lights

dance the green of evening

enticing my smile

captured in my hands

life does not mind a moments

appreciation

expecting only

freedom once again

in fluttering joy

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Guest avoice

shoot...missed "to be"...third part, second line...

oops...

should be: freedom to be once again...

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flashing yellow lights

dance the green of evening

enticing my smile

captured in my hands

life does not mind a moments

appreciation

expecting only

freedom to be once again

in fluttering joy

Excellent piece, Avoice!

Personally, when it comes to writing haiku, I'm generally too lazy to keep a thought going for longer than a single verse. I'm a bit in awe of those who can.

Regards,

Verisoph

BTW: I hope you don't mind that I've taken the liberty of editing the quote in order to insert the corrected line.

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Guest avoice

minding Verisoph

weighs little upon my brow

when I share your smile

;):D:P

thanks for the encouragement!!!!!!!

:clap:

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So much talent here

Poetic, always graceful

Here we have the key

So much passion here

Pain, Laughter, All with feeling

Here I wish to be

This forum is home

So many of us live here

At least in our hearts

Mentors help us grow

Siblings for our arguments

Friends for a lifetime

All apologies

For sickly sweet sentiments

I just learned this form

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