Administrator murphzlaw1 Posted September 30, 2007 Administrator Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 As I lay on my bed, thinking about you, I feel this strong urge to grab you and squeeze you, because I can't forget last night. You came to me unexpectedly during the balmy and calm night, and what happened in my bed still leaves a tingling sensation in me. You appeared from nowhere and shamelessly without any reservations, you laid on my naked body... you sensed my indifference, so you applied your hungry mouth to me without any guilt or humiliation, and you drove me near crazy while you drained me. Finally I went to sleep. Today when I woke up, you were gone, I searched for you but to no avail, only the sheets bore witness to last nights events. My body still bears faint marks of your enthusiastic ravishing, making it harder to forget you. Tonight I will remain awake waiting for you.............................. You stupid mosquito Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bel Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 And here I thought you were getting all romantic and mushy all of a sudden! Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 good one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idealdabbler Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 Had me all hot and bothered for a minute, Murph. As old as I am, you can consider that a compliment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 Sexy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted October 1, 2007 Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 I thought this applied to a blood sucker of another kind."You stupid mosquito." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted October 1, 2007 Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 ~ I've always enjoyed this one! But I can't help it! I gotta!!!{Just a suggestion, ignore it easy. It is your art & your voice! Just line-break suggestions, OK?}As I lay on my bed, thinking about you, I feel this strong urge to grab you and squeeze you, because I can't forget last night. You came to me unexpectedly during the balmy and calm night, and what happened in my bed still leaves a tingling sensation in me. You appeared from nowhere and shamelessly without any reservations, you laid on my naked body... you sensed my indifference, so you applied your hungry mouth to me without any guilt or humiliation, and you drove me near crazy while you drained me. Finally I went to sleep. Today when I woke up, you were gone, I searched for you but to no avail, only the sheets bore witness to last nights events. My body still bears faint marks of your enthusiastic ravishing, making it harder to forget you. Tonight I will remain awake waiting for you.............................. You stupid mosquito... I know, I'm awful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AT8FATES Posted October 1, 2007 Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 Nevermind that "stupid mosquito" murph-, write man, write! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator murphzlaw1 Posted October 1, 2007 Author Administrator Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 thank you, thank you.I'm glad it amused, but I cannot take credit for the poem.I can't write very well, personally..ask anyone**.And yeah, Claire, I screwed with the line breaks. It was pretty much as you had posted it, actually. I thought it'd be better in paragraphs, cuz I'm that kinda guy.**Hush, Theresa. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bel Posted October 1, 2007 Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 No Theresa, don't hush. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted October 1, 2007 Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 Go ahead argue over what I should say.Like, I'm going to do whatever I want anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 Go ahead argue over what I should say.Like, I'm going to do whatever I want anyway.Give 'em the vote and see what happens? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 Yep, that's right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 Give 'em the vote and see what happens? "Next thing you know they'll be wanting to wear pants!" Quote from customer at Dickens Faire last year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 But, I don't want to wear panties. and you can't make me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator murphzlaw1 Posted October 2, 2007 Author Administrator Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 er..okay...but just this once. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted October 3, 2007 Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 I had to go back and make sure I didn't type "panties" in my post. Theresa you can wear what ever makes you happy luv!! Or our beloved King happy too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted October 3, 2007 Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 I had to go back and make sure I didn't type "panties" in my post. Theresa you can wear what ever makes you happy luv!! Or our beloved King happy too.It's a goood thing he likes my taste in clothes then. Huh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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