Phillipe Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 Looking into your eyes, I see that you're goneListening to you talk, I hear nothingTouching you, I feel only emptinessYou're gone, although you're hereBut you were never here So now I'm goneForever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 Does that mean you are a fig newton of my imagration? Seriously, I liked the poem. But it saddens me to think you feel you are gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 ~ I like that Phil, nicely done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted September 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 Does that mean you are a fig newton of my imagration? Seriously, I liked the poem. But it saddens me to think you feel you are gone.More like a Twinkie of your mind. Being gone, one cannot feel pain.I like that Phil, nicely done!Thank you, m'lady. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 unfortunately I understand that point of view Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 (edited) That is absolutely the worst feeling anyone can ever have, in any relationship. Edited September 29, 2007 by Theresa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 yeah, I couldn't even put it into words... but Theresa ^ had the right ones Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AT8FATES Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 More like a Twinkie of your mind. Being gone, one cannot feel pain.Thank you, m'lady.I think I would have to disagree with ya there, phil.(though it may depend upon how far you go...maybe) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted September 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 I think I would have to disagree with ya there, phil.(though it may depend upon how far you go...maybe)Whot - on the Twinkie bit? Eh - I think I mixed two kinds of gone in there......sounds like a bad episode of "Sesame Street" - "One of these Gones is not like the otherOne of these Gones just doesn't belongCan you guess which Gone is not like the otherBefore I finish this stupid song?"...or however it went... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idealdabbler Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 Very expressive Phil. Do some more like this. You've got a great sense of humor, but I really like your more serious works too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 I like the Twinkie bit. But I thought you meant you felt like you wanted to be gone forever.Like as in never to exist again kind of gone. That's what saddend me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AT8FATES Posted October 1, 2007 Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 Very expressive Phil. Do some more like this. You've got a great sense of humor, but I really like your more serious works too. ...to you phil, whether you like it, or want it or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted October 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 Very expressive Phil. Do some more like this. You've got a great sense of humor, but I really like your more serious works too.Thanks, Dabby. I promise I'll try to be serious....OOOh that hurts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted October 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 I like the Twinkie bit. But I thought you meant you felt like you wanted to be gone forever.Like as in never to exist again kind of gone. That's what saddend me.Why be sad? If you're gone, you might not even realize it - nor anything else, for that matter. A complete void. Eternal nothingness. The Ultimate Blank....sounds like a package tour I took once... Sometimes, Gone calls to us... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted October 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 ...to you phil, whether you like it, or want it or not. Humph. Don't need itDon't want itCan't have itWon't flaunt itNo thumbs upNo thumbs downNo big grinsNo sad frownNo joy in MudvilleNo zest in Bel-AirNo laughter in TulsaNo grins in MontclaireNo cash in my pocketNo dames in my bedNo hope for the futureNo brains in my head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasuss Posted October 1, 2007 Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted October 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 Yr wlcm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 Why be sad? If you're gone, you might not even realize it - nor anything else, for that matter. A complete void. Eternal nothingness. The Ultimate Blank....sounds like a package tour I took once... Sometimes, Gone calls to us...But my beloved King, I belive the Void has a consciousness. It is not a complete blank to me. There is a music there and a presence. Well, if you manage to find the void, you just might find me there. It's my favorite hidding place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted October 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 But my beloved King, I belive the Void has a consciousness. It is not a complete blank to me. There is a music there and a presence. Well, if you manage to find the void, you just might find me there. It's my favorite hidding place.Well, one very important thing to realize...Void where prohibited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idealdabbler Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 Well, one very important thing to realize...Void where prohibited. Don't a-void this, Phil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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