Bel Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 I really identify with this. Well-crafted, short, but eloquent. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 I know this one isn't very good, but it's meant from the heart!In search of a lonely place, the mountain I did climbThe quiet and aloneness I did crave, to forget and be forgottenThe top I did reach, peace at last my soul sang!Solitude I did not find, all of you were there to keep me company Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Fred Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 I know this one isn't very good, but it's meant from the heart!In search of a lonely place, the mountain I did climbThe quiet and aloneness I did crave, to forget and be forgottenThe top I did reach, peace at last my soul sang!Solitude I did not find, all of you were there to keep me company Beautiful Flower.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted October 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 ~ Yep, I had a thought...Dark water reflecting soft white petalsnibbled on by fancy fish Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idealdabbler Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 ~ Yep, I had a thought...Dark water reflecting soft white petalsnibbled on by fancy fishFancy fishnibbled onby soft white petalsreflectingdark water ~sorry...~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted October 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 ~ I'm even worse Darlin! Dark water reflecting soft white petalsnibbled on by fancy fishFish fancy byon nibbled petalswhite soft reflectingwater darkFancy fishnibbled onby soft white petalsreflectingdark waterwater dark reflectingpetals white soft byon nibbledfish fancy... Hey, if you thought that was a translation from another language, you'd go, "Wooo!" Huh?{& y'know, with some effort, it's doable any-ole way... Fine. I'll work on it. *snort*} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted October 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 dark water reflectingwhite petalsand fancy fishFish fancy andpetals white reflecting water dark... Fancy fish oftennibbling soft white petalsreflectingdark waterwater dark reflectingpetals white soft nibblingoften fish fancy... Just playing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted October 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2007 Slanted Autumn light gilding trees river frostthe hollow sound of geese passingby! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted October 19, 2007 Report Share Posted October 19, 2007 Beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted October 19, 2007 Report Share Posted October 19, 2007 ~ I'm even worse Darlin! Dark water reflecting soft white petalsnibbled on by fancy fishFish fancy byon nibbled petalswhite soft reflectingwater dark... Hey, if you thought that was a translation from another language, you'd go, "Wooo!" Huh?{& y'know, with some effort, it's doable any-ole way... Fine. I'll work on it. *snort*}Hi Q here is a translation in German for you. I got it from babelfish.alt. Hope you like it.Das dunkle Wasser, das weiche weiße Blumenblätter reflektiert, nagte an durch phantastische Fische Fischphantasie vorbei auf abgenagter weißer weicher reflektierender Wasserdunkelheit der Blumenblätter ab Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted October 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 ~ Thanks Flower! Our daughter took German for a semester & {true to form} became an 'expert' I've gotta show her that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted October 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 ~ Thank you Theresa! There is something about Autumn's light that just, I don't know... Makes my strings sing?Autumn twilight caught by the windLeaves patter soft about meWashing the hills in goldMy breath is scattered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idealdabbler Posted October 20, 2007 Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 Autumn twilight caught by the windLeaves patter soft about meWashing the hills in goldMy breath is scatteredscattered is My breath gold in the hills Washing about me soft Leaves patter the windcaught by Autumn twilight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted October 20, 2007 Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 Same poem in Itialian:L'acqua scura che riflette i petali bianchi molli ha sgranocchiato sopra dall'immaginazione operata dei pesci dei pesci vicino su oscurità riflettente morbida bianca sgranocchiata dell'acqua dei petaliJapanese:柔らかく白い花弁を反映する暗い水はかじられた花弁白く柔らかい反映水暗闇の豪華な魚の魚の空想によってかじったOr Greek:Σκοτεινό ύδωρ που απεικονίζει τα μαλακά άσπρα πέταλα μισοντα ψηφιολέξης επάνω από τη φανταχτερή φαντασία ψαριών ψαριών κοντά στο μισον ψηφιολέξης σκοτάδι ύδατος πετάλων άσπρο μαλακό απεικονίζονταςI just found babelfish and love it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted October 21, 2007 Report Share Posted October 21, 2007 Same poem in Itialian:L'acqua scura che riflette i petali bianchi molli ha sgranocchiato sopra dall'immaginazione operata dei pesci dei pesci vicino su oscurità riflettente morbida bianca sgranocchiata dell'acqua dei petaliJapanese:柔らかく白い花弁を反映する暗い水はかじられた花弁白く柔らかい反映水暗闇の豪華な魚の魚の空想によってかじったOr Greek:Σκοτεινό ύδωρ που απεικονίζει τα μαλακά άσπρα πέταλα μισοντα ψηφιολέξης επάνω από τη φανταχτερή φαντασία ψαριών ψαριών κοντά στο μισον ψηφιολέξης σκοτάδι ύδατος πετάλων άσπρο μαλακό απεικονίζονταςI just found babelfish and love it!!if you're a fan of grammar, turn it around & see how it goes!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted October 21, 2007 Report Share Posted October 21, 2007 Awe now you've gone and ruiend all my fun! I can't read any of what that says, how am I supposed to turn it around? Oh wait, maybe if I hold it up in a mirror? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RevRainbow Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Dust,Trust, Lust; Dust. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PastorWilbur Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 I like shorts, but mostly just in Summer.Ooops...just re-read that.My bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Awe now you've gone and ruiend all my fun! I can't read any of what that says, how am I supposed to turn it around? Oh wait, maybe if I hold it up in a mirror? awww, I'm sorry, Flower... YOU can keep on enjoying it, AND most of US HERE will also, 'cuz WE don't know the diff either!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 ~ Hey! I'm supposed to be the babbler around here... Stop horning in on my 'thang'! ~ Thanx Dabby! {Just diddling again... }Autumn calls softly...Hills washed golden,Pattering leaves floating,My breath is scattered too.Too scattered is my breath.Floating leaves pattering,Golden washed hills,Softly calls autumn...I've gotta stop! You have no idea how many variations I've gone through. {'my soul is scattered too'? mind? self? life? view? Arrrgh! I drive myself crazy...} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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