SilverRose Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 If you close your eyesyour perceptions will be entirely differentas if the blindwho can see only with the heartfocusing nothing on the flesh and its deformitybut instead, on what is withinand what is within, My Friend?everything which must remain unspoken,knowing the words would servefor you to walk away in silence--without a chancewithout a hopefor you can see only with your eyesas you gather and embrace rainbowsunable to see one quiet color in your handas an unshed tearor a shower of rosepetals,wordless--for you can see only with your eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RevRainbow Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 Very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted November 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 thanks I wish I could write as well as I used to... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RevRainbow Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 (edited) thanks I wish I could write as well as I used to... And I wish I could drink as much as I used to!! Edited November 26, 2007 by RevRainbow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted November 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2007 And I wish I could drink as much as I used to!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted November 27, 2007 Report Share Posted November 27, 2007 I think you write as well as you do now, there is only today. Styles change, words change. But you write beautifully today. In a few more years will you say the samething of your works now? Just a thought that popped into my head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted November 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2007 well, no... in a few years- if I'm still alive- I hope I will have improved... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 ~ You write from your heart. Nothing better than that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 ~ You write from your heart. Nothing better than that! that is true. thanks Claire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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