Qryos Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Watch what words you sayfor what you spout can be used another dayit's a crappy dance used to entrance and crap can fertilize before you realize the thoughts of others just for bothering a simple spotnot something truly caught or bought by discussionjust the past regurgitated yep Surprise! this dayit's once again in play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirling Dervish Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Dancing fancy and freeI mop upregurgitation with gleebefore the stain sets inI get out the hoseto wash the smell of crapout of my noseas my eyeswitness delusional wordsand outright liesthat are swept by my mindthat is perfectly soundwhile the song in my earis perfectly clearto keep my heart dancingon holy ground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 ViewsThe vicissitudes of lifeChange usFor better or for worse.You can think of itAs lessons learnedOr consider it a curse.Your attitude can beConsiderateOr become short and terse.It all dependsOn how you want to be remembered.When you leave us in a hearse.Theresa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirling Dervish Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Don't think much of dyingrather dream of flyingIf I go southand if I'm rememberedIt may be for obscenitiesspewn from my mouthor how my body betrays mewith twitches and tics.If I seem inconsiderateshould I worry my headabout what is said of the dead?I'm too young to drinkNothing to calm meI'm too quick to thinkmedication won't workso if I seem like a jerkyou can call it a curseor a lesson well learnedbut tell mehow was it earned?~TV~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 ~ WoW! Guess I sorta opened a slue, huh? Please! Continue!!! Great stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirling Dervish Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 (edited) ~ WoW! Guess I sorta opened a slue, huh? Please! Continue!!! Great stuff! hey, I was a poet and didn't even know it! You inspire me Qryos!slinging thoughts like mudmessy and randomonly yourselfto go one on one withPounding then soothingemotions locked thereinfilthy and dirtyall squeaky clean again Edited September 21, 2007 by Torpedo Vegas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 ~ I've created a monster! ... Continue oh my beast! Craft & craft some more! You're doing marvelously! Really!!! Play with it... Let it pour forth! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirling Dervish Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 (edited) ~ I've created a monster! ... Continue oh my beast! Craft & craft some more! You're doing marvelously! Really!!! Play with it... Let it pour forth! As the beast poured forthhis words by craftin lieu of pulling themout of his assHis mind boiledand seethed withinas he spun in circlesvisions spiraled out from his corewhere they lay coiledNow sprungin wondrous releaseHe drew themand slew themTasting first bloodhe wanted morefor usually roiledhe had found a great peace. Edited September 22, 2007 by Torpedo Vegas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 It's always pleasing to see the birth of a poet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 I know this one isn't very good, but here's to playing in Claire's monster box.Sweet words they glisten like tiny dropletsfrom my lover's lipsHarsh words they cut like silver daggersfrom my enemy's mouthThe first words of a childso sweet and dearMommaWords they dance and playa golden tuneof joy and loveWords they sting and harma violent runefear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted September 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 (edited) ~ Playing in my monster box? {Phil, I know what you're thinking! Don't you even...} Such wonderfully powerful work! Look at what beauty you've both created Don't ever be afraid of any word you know. Embrace every one & know that each has its place.You have that image, you have that emotion. That is yours to express... It's your art & soul & heart, that truly YOU part you display whether joy or dismay, it's your voice, your choice, go ahead & play!{Just as an aside thing... I've worked with poets to get them published. Just editing assistance.If anyone wants such, just P.M. me. I work free for friends } Edited September 23, 2007 by Qryos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 ~ Playing in my monster box? {Phil, I know what you're thinking! Don't you even...}My Lady, I am shocked - SHOCKED - that you would even conceive of such a thing...The Monster Box sat in the cornerPurple, black and greenIt oozed red slime around the topIt truly was obsceneIt sat upon a yellow trayThat sparkled silver-goldAnd when I tried to touch Claire's BoxMy fingers froze from coldBut then, an otherworldly screamDid issue from that BoxIt moaned and groaned and drooled a bitThen broke off all its locksA wondrous sight did then appear(But then, you probably know it)-The Monster Box was over-filledWith works by Claire, the poet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirling Dervish Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 to all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bel Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 Phil Luv, you have the most incredible mind.Claire, you just rock girl.TV, keep it up, you've got a knack forr this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 Hey, I started calling it the Monster Box! But I was thinking about a giant sand box filled with Word Monsters. For you dear ClaireThe Monster BoxThe Monster Box is filled with grains of thoughtsA place for Word Monsters to come and playClaire opened the Box for us to enjoyGrains of thoughts sift through our mindsSand castles, mud fights, dreams of things yet to come! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirling Dervish Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 Hey, I started calling it the Monster Box! But I was thinking about a giant sand box filled with Word Monsters. I thought about all the monsters that roam in my mind... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted September 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2007 (edited) Purple, black and greenIt oozed red slime around the topIt truly was obscene ~ I gotta say, never, ever! In any way on any day did anyone before think of my box that way! ... Thank you Flower! Gimme hugs ~ So, words are turning aboutand maybe perhaps giving a Shout!Z'okay, all crap needs out... This is so coool... Please, everyone! Play!!!I find this marvelous... Edited September 24, 2007 by Qryos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted September 24, 2007 Report Share Posted September 24, 2007 Actually, I only came to this thread because I thought you were going to talk about two of the Dwarfs... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bel Posted September 24, 2007 Report Share Posted September 24, 2007 She did, we just haven't decide which one of us is drunk and which one is grumpy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted September 24, 2007 Report Share Posted September 24, 2007 Well, she already said I'm Grumpy, so that only leaves one dwarf left... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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