Blackowt Posted January 30, 2013 Report Share Posted January 30, 2013 LAST NIGHT I HEARD MY SOUL CRYCOULDN'T UNDERSTAND ITAS FROM BED I RISEDMY SOUL IS TIRED LIESAND HATEFUL ONESTHAT CRITICIZEDON'T THEY REALIZE THEY CAN'T LIVE MY LIFETHEY JUST ADDING ON TO THE STRIFEI PRAY EVERYDAY TO SEND AN ANSWERCAUSE THIS WORLD IS LIKE A CANCERTHOUGHTS TROTTING THROUGHMY HEAD LIKE A DANCERWHAT ARE TRYING TO SAY TO MEBY SURROUNDING ME IN TRAGEDYIN THE DARK SEARCHING FOR THE LIGHTSTAY GOING LEFT WHENHE TRY TO STEER ME RIGHTAND THOUGH I FIND LESSONSIN EACH PLIGHTITS GETTING KIND OF HARDPUTTING UP A FIGHTI FEEL LIKE WAVING THAT WHITE FLAGTYING IT ALL UP IN A BAGREASONS TO LIVE ARE GETTING FEWAND IM STUCK WONDERING WHAT TO DOI PUT MY MIND DOWN ON PAPERHOPING THIS CLOUD WILL DISAPPEAR LIKE VAPOREVERYDAY I ASK MYSELF WHYHE HAS YET TO TAKE MY LIFEGOTTA STAY STRONG MY EYES ARE DRYIT'S JUST MY SOUL THAT CRIESBLACKOWT PUBLISHING -at-2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ex Nihilo Posted February 6, 2013 Report Share Posted February 6, 2013 Very powerful...I loved it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atwater Vitki Posted February 7, 2013 Report Share Posted February 7, 2013 I think that expresses how many of us feel from time to time Blackowt.Don't ya know we all wish we had the answers to our every triumph and failure in Life. We all think if we had the answers things would be better. I'm not so sure, even though I ask my own questions. Quite often I find when I do have an enlightened moment that explains one of Life's quandaries, it just leads to more questions anyway! But yes, I have to agree with Mith, powerful imagery presented by your words.Blessings of Peace, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackowt Posted February 8, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2013 lol thank both of you....I wrote this when i was in a low space and yea answers just lead to more questions....such is the story of my life looking for answers so i can ask more questions lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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