Cosmo Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Oh donut who once held such magic I look upon you now and you have lost itFor I have filled my face with your round pleasuresTasted your icing your jam your fruit and your nut And found you lacking Oh donut who once held such magicI look upon your glazed exterior and feel slightly illFor I have taken your inner meaning to be more than it really isI once believed you to be the indesputable king of confectionaryBut now I know your are just a donutYou, small ex friend of mine Have become something to me less than hole ( y )For now I can take you or leave you on the rackI can walk past you and not look backI could go for weeks without your tasteI could even discard you , and leave you for wasteFor you , ex friend of mine Are merely dough with some jam , its blasphemy I knowBut for the time being my old round ex friendI prefer tortillas and avacado dip Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great Cthulhu Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Outstanding verse with such an impressive use of 'tongue in cheek' humor! (I still get sucked in by the occasional Krispy Kreme...) Thanks for sharing!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Couldn't stop giggling. Murph needs to read this one. He did a post years ago about a stolen Krispy Kreme truck. LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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