Argonious Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Abandoned By the Sepherioth….Oh so many ways it begs me to show youHow your dogma and sepherioth has abandoned you on this sidePray to the Sepherioth and to the Son is what they say to be as oneNever taste of the fruit they stoleNever stray from his side, never break traditions of oldNever choke on a lie, or steal from his clergy on high many are toldHe's the one that did this to you, as was wiseNever thought to question how or when or whyGive the glory to the sepherioth and to the Son is what they say to be as oneNot like you who spiked someone up against the skyA spiteful spear in to his side from your dirty doubtful mortal hideTalk to the Son stand by his side and see the reason for his external bleed of your prideHe knows the reason why so be not severely shyWho did it all for you and wanted to be oh so very true went and diedDid it all for you on this side to keep you from the immortality that remains hidden in all the liesAll for you to be blameless and remain aliveYou are the untrue reason why not to be at his sideAbandoned and alone you see are the reasons that the sepherioth can not know what you are to be© Mwyncoop 2008All Rights Reserved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 ~ I like that a lot!{& yes, a lot will not like it... }Read it again & like it more. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mererdog Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 (edited) If it's meant to be parody or homage, you really should cite the original. Virgin Records aggressively litigates anything it considers to be an infringement of it's copyrights. Edited April 4, 2008 by Not murphzlaw1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argonious Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 If it's meant to be parody or homage, you really should cite the original. Virgin Records aggressively litigates anything it considers to be an infringement of it's copyrights.Show me the original one please so I can see it...... I did not know virgin records had this as lyrics...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mererdog Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Show me the original one please so I can see it...... I did not know virgin records had this as lyrics...... Large sections are lifted directly from Judith by A Perfect Circle. Whether the changes are sufficient to qualify as fair use would be debatable. Citing the original as inspiration for an homage or as basis for a parody would make the matter less debatable. It would also make it less plagiaristic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argonious Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 (edited) Large sections are lifted directly from Judith by A Perfect Circle. Whether the changes are sufficient to qualify as fair use would be debatable. Citing the original as inspiration for an homage or as basis for a parody would make the matter less debatable. It would also make it less plagiaristic.well I for one am impressed how close they are. I have never heard of this song or the person who sang it. but if it will please whom ever I will call it a parity to the Sepheronic Rule of Lives.... I will most gladly aqueous to the original Judith by A Perfect Circle. My Apologies for my inherit misgivings that have been pointed out to me.... Edited April 4, 2008 by Argonious_Son of Dante Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argonious Posted April 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 I have revamped the above poem so no plagiarisms is involved and would ask a Administrator or Moderator to please remove this entire post Thank You Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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