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Sitting within the darkness of ourselves

it could be resounding within shadows

a truth that may outlast all tomorrows.

It may be future-bound to taint the years

and so connect and soflty redirect

all those unneeded unwanted fears.

Living now deeply within may be

a truth that stays hidden unproven

and not yet brightly envisioned .

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~ Glad you like it!

Of course this morning I wondered if I over-stepped or something. Stuff does just seem to spill sometimes...

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Sitting within the darkness

of ourselves

it could be resounding

within shadows

a truth that may outlast

all tomorrows.

It may be future-bound

to taint the years

and so connect

and soflty redirect

all those unneeded

unwanted fears.

Living now deeply within

may be a truth that stays hidden

unproven and not yet

brightly envisioned .

~ Yahhh, I know, I diddle....

Sitting

within the darkness of ourselves

it could be resounding

within shadows

a truth

that may outlast all tomorrows.

It may be future-bound

to taint the years

and so connect and soflty redirect

all those unneeded

unwanted fears.

Living now deeply within

may be

a truth that stays hidden unproven

and not yet brightly envisioned .

... Breaks are important! I know, I'm fussing. Sorry to be a pain here...

I really appreciate feed-back!

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Her ya go I worked on this for a little bit to help you understand me more...

He's in a battle with the world and himself

That is fought between the lines of light and darkness

He's desensitized to everything he ever felt

and his life is full of unnatural things from the agony of regrets

so...alone

so...sorry

so...cold

He's treated so harshly

in a duel of good and evil, light and dark

someone set him free

it's killing his ability to heal and see

so...addicted

so...scarred

so...conflicted

so far away from all things alive

someone save him from himself inside

for they could not find a way

to take him away from his guilt

and make it fade in the crumbled life they built

so...reborn

so...set free

so...renewed

so...alive

take him not away

this battle regains his heart...blackened and darken in the nite

but he will be at last set free, and all regrets will flee.

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Guest Solbehlas Draconis
"Coming into the Darkness"

For years the light has blinded me from my destiny.
It has betrayed me of my chosen path.
I lost so much in years where I could have been now.
Only to come late and work harder to catch up to where I need to be.

Now the roots of darkness have grown in me like a giant tree.
It is all making sense to what I am.
To what I need to become.
To be one with those roots.

Never again will I allow the white blinding light take me away.
Never will I be from my path.
Never will I be a follower.
Never again will I be lonely.

Darkness is my soul as the roots intertwine becoming one.
I come from the dark void.
So shall my soul return.
May dark blessings be one with me.

Solbehlas Draconious 2008

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~ Y'know, I never expected this to be a topic, but it certainly is one now, huh?

With 2 gifted writers joining with their art! Thank you both :biggrinthumb:

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