Qryos Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Sitting within the darkness of ourselvesit could be resounding within shadows a truth that may outlast all tomorrows.It may be future-bound to taint the years and so connect and soflty redirect all those unneeded unwanted fears.Living now deeply within may be a truth that stays hidden unproven and not yet brightly envisioned . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bel Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 COOL! He should like that. Claire, you are a truly gifted lady. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argonious Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 That is Sooo Perfect and Truthful I admire your talent and work I have read it to my Dark Father also he much approves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted March 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 ~ Glad you like it!Of course this morning I wondered if I over-stepped or something. Stuff does just seem to spill sometimes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted March 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2008 (edited) Sitting within the darkness of ourselves it could be resounding within shadows a truth that may outlast all tomorrows.It may be future-bound to taint the years and so connect and soflty redirect all those unneeded unwanted fears.Living now deeply within may be a truth that stays hidden unproven and not yet brightly envisioned .~ Yahhh, I know, I diddle....Sitting within the darkness of ourselvesit could be resounding within shadows a truth that may outlast all tomorrows.It may be future-bound to taint the years and so connect and soflty redirect all those unneeded unwanted fears.Living now deeply within may be a truth that stays hidden unproven and not yet brightly envisioned .... Breaks are important! I know, I'm fussing. Sorry to be a pain here...I really appreciate feed-back! Edited March 11, 2008 by Qryos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argonious Posted March 11, 2008 Report Share Posted March 11, 2008 I still Like it a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argonious Posted March 11, 2008 Report Share Posted March 11, 2008 Her ya go I worked on this for a little bit to help you understand me more...He's in a battle with the world and himselfThat is fought between the lines of light and darknessHe's desensitized to everything he ever feltand his life is full of unnatural things from the agony of regretsso...aloneso...sorryso...coldHe's treated so harshlyin a duel of good and evil, light and darksomeone set him freeit's killing his ability to heal and seeso...addictedso...scarredso...conflictedso far away from all things alivesomeone save him from himself insidefor they could not find a wayto take him away from his guiltand make it fade in the crumbled life they builtso...rebornso...set freeso...renewedso...alivetake him not awaythis battle regains his heart...blackened and darken in the nitebut he will be at last set free, and all regrets will flee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Solbehlas Draconis Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 "Coming into the Darkness"For years the light has blinded me from my destiny.It has betrayed me of my chosen path.I lost so much in years where I could have been now.Only to come late and work harder to catch up to where I need to be.Now the roots of darkness have grown in me like a giant tree.It is all making sense to what I am.To what I need to become.To be one with those roots.Never again will I allow the white blinding light take me away.Never will I be from my path.Never will I be a follower.Never again will I be lonely.Darkness is my soul as the roots intertwine becoming one.I come from the dark void.So shall my soul return.May dark blessings be one with me.Solbehlas Draconious 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted March 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 ~ Y'know, I never expected this to be a topic, but it certainly is one now, huh? With 2 gifted writers joining with their art! Thank you both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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