Qryos Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 (edited) I light a candle each night <silly, I know>Then bathe and dress and I wait<to bring you back>Til dawn seeps over the trees<I know you well>Every time there is a breeze<silly, I know>I hear the sound of a gate<to bring you back>Yet you never are in sight<I know you well>~ Yes, I'm trying a different thing. I really don't intend to be annoying, I just enjoy skewing forms. Edited December 7, 2007 by Qryos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bel Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 I like it, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 Nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 beautiful!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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