SilverRose Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 Rarely-- if ever-- am I so touched by a songAs to make my eyes water, and heart pale in comparisonto its imageMy skin turns cold as if in a sudden chillthe song taking me back to an era long before my birth:Images-- stories told to me throughout the yearsstories and realties of them, their friends, their sons,the girls the men the promisesAll as Genesiswhich somehow skipped meThe song melting away timeBringing together the generationsThe two of them in 1945When my soul was but an unformed teardrop in heaven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bel Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted December 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 Excellent!I stopped writing poetry in 1985... didn't "pick up the pen" again til I came here to the forum a a few years ago... and found that I no longer have the ability that's just a note to anybody who thinks about setting their writing aside for awhile: don't! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 ~ Darlin', it's not gone!You still have that magnificent voice from your heart & soul.Don't you ever believe that you have lost anything, ever...It's within you always.You only need to release the voice you have now.Yes, of course it has a different timbre & message, but it is still You.Bellow a bit, get the rust out, share & declare Your voice now.~YOU ~You are a magnificent person that has wickedly swift words that touch deeply fine-tuned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 Dear Heart,I agree with Q. The voice is still within you. Sometimes it's not the voice that is lost, but we forget how to listen. This could be for many reasons. Perhaps we feel our words are lost on those we wish to share with. Or that other voices get in the way.Brightest Blessings,Flower Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted December 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 it's just that I can't create form anymore... but I sure do appreciate hearing from you two... it means even more BECAUSE it comes from you two... ((((((HUGS)))))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 Hugs back to you Heart. Perhaps the voice is trying to express itself in another way? I've never really studied poetic styles, so don't konw the difference. But what you write is beautiful!!Flower Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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