Verisoph

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  1. Natural poetic.  I've been writing since I was a kid.

    And don't be fooled, 90% of it is always sickly sweet

    nothing wrong with sweet

    it's only ever sickly

    if you think it so

    I have a tendency to write "purple prose" myself, gaudy perhaps, but it's just the way the words come to me.

    Regards,

    Verisoph

  2. flashing yellow lights

    dance the green of evening

    enticing my smile

    captured in my hands

    life does not mind a moments

    appreciation

    expecting only

    freedom to be once again

    in fluttering joy

    Excellent piece, Avoice!

    Personally, when it comes to writing haiku, I'm generally too lazy to keep a thought going for longer than a single verse. I'm a bit in awe of those who can.

    Regards,

    Verisoph

    BTW: I hope you don't mind that I've taken the liberty of editing the quote in order to insert the corrected line.