Piglet Posted August 13, 2007 Report Share Posted August 13, 2007 First one:LonelinessAn isolation,No one there to confide,You don't like to listen.No echo resounds,All alone, nobody there,Echo of stillness.Heavy weight drowns me,Pressing on my shoulders,A profound struggle.A deathly quiet,A need of a hearing test,Drumming oppression.Blanket of silence,Suppression of darkest black,The mental torture.and another one, more simple: bullets and a rose a black rose for you and a bullet for mesmile in regretas my car hits a treelaugh as i gagwhen the rope pulls tightsleep safe and soundknowing I'm not alrightas the razors cutbreathe out your sorrowdoesn't matter how i goill be dead by tomorrowsomething to live for is all i don't havenothing to part withis something i hadyou wont cry or smile at allyou'll just stand there and watch me fallthats all i wantthats all i needstand by my sideand wait as i bleedand when its all over breathe me back inthe end of my life is where i begin hope you enjoy them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted August 13, 2007 Report Share Posted August 13, 2007 Nice!Dark and well-done, just the way I like them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted August 15, 2007 Report Share Posted August 15, 2007 ~ Well crafted, well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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