Decline Posted October 23, 2011 Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 Feel my heart breaking.Turn your blind eye to my truth.Now I'm all alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songster Posted October 23, 2011 Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 Solitary SoulSeeks solace in syllablesBroken heart haiku Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decline Posted October 23, 2011 Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 Beautiful haiku.Full of alliteration.Sympathy received. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songster Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Thanks! Sometimes I get lucky. (My Muse was sitting on my lap when I read yours.) Chin up, my friend! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songster Posted November 4, 2011 Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 A gray morning mistIn coiling cloaks of comfortCovers dreaming streams. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atwater Vitki Posted November 19, 2011 Report Share Posted November 19, 2011 (edited) Orange, red and green,Hang waving in unison,Before the blue sky.Bright and beautiful,Crisp, clean, breezes blowing south,Cat upon the fence.Glory today shows,Creator's magical gift,Wish it would remain.Blessings of Peace,AlJust such a beautiful, wonderful day outside today...one of those days that define "Fall". I'm probably not getting much better at haiku, even after reading a couple of e-books (thank you kobo.com) on the theory and process. So much I don't understand about it! I'd do better at drawing or painting a picture of it, but who knows...enough practice I might get it right one of these times, yes? Edited November 19, 2011 by Atwater Vitki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songster Posted November 19, 2011 Report Share Posted November 19, 2011 Nicely done, Bro. Al! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songster Posted November 29, 2011 Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 The haiku posted by me in this forum is my work, and my property, and I retain the copyrights to my property. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 ~ Of course you retain all rights to everything you post Songster... No need to worry! moonlight carves the nightsharp echoes shatter awaywind dancing shadows Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verisoph Posted January 22, 2012 Report Share Posted January 22, 2012 all seasons of peacefor many reasons do ceasewith barely a crease Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decline Posted February 2, 2012 Report Share Posted February 2, 2012 (edited) Veri, nice to see you back! Now that I know moreI know that I don't know muchYou know what I mean? Edited February 2, 2012 by Decline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verisoph Posted February 4, 2012 Report Share Posted February 4, 2012 good to see you too Veri, nice to see you back! Now that I know more I know that I don't know much You know what I mean? good to see you tooI know I don't know anythingis that what you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decline Posted May 4, 2012 Report Share Posted May 4, 2012 The weight of one tearHanging upon my eyelash Is too much to bear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrDevon Posted May 28, 2012 Report Share Posted May 28, 2012 (edited) Unknown, yet despisedhated just for being meyet we never metreject in your eyesstandards you call purityimposed on those you choosekilled before I livedat least within a mind closed downto offers of friendshipyou say you do not killworse: you only wish me deadunfit by your rules. Edited May 28, 2012 by BrDevon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seeker Posted August 22, 2012 Report Share Posted August 22, 2012 Smoke from ancient peatMalted grains, clear spring water.Uisge Beatha: Slainte!And to answer the question in the thread title - haiku is the plural. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluecat Posted August 31, 2012 Report Share Posted August 31, 2012 Summer is ending:I am still at my work deskas the weekend starts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrDevon Posted August 31, 2012 Report Share Posted August 31, 2012 Two friends suffer loss:Hearts lay bare exposed to grief -"I'm sorry" 's not enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted August 10, 2013 Report Share Posted August 10, 2013 dark grey skies gathergeese formations vee to homeonward comes winter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seeker Posted August 10, 2013 Report Share Posted August 10, 2013 Warm cinnamon smells.Outside, in a whitewashed worlda lonely robin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted August 30, 2013 Report Share Posted August 30, 2013 a dark felted skydark orange sun setting moltenYosemite burns Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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