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~ From A Dream...

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Speaking to a violent sea and receiving peace,

My soul has been washed and released.

I may be a stone at the shore,

Yet I have shifted tides

And the tides touch all.

Any suggestions? I do appreciate criticism, seriously!

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Wow. That little change made all the difference in the world. It gave me shivers when I read it just now. :)

Love, Tom

Edited by idealdabbler

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I just thought of something, Qryos

and wanted to tell you (since you have that pile of cuties :kiss:)

that when I read your words, I was immediately reminded of one of my most important books - a mainstay in my classrooms over the years

(official, traditional classrooms and itinerant variations all the same)

the story was The Whales Song by Dyan Cannon

it is as appealing and important to the adult who is reading it as it is to the child

cuddled in your lap

Lily's grandmother was so wise

like you, she heard the message of the "sea', and she received a gift

and was able to pass that gift on to her grand-daughter

there's no denying magic of sorts

if you find it, see if you want to read it to your girls; I don't think you'll be disappointed! (wink)

Edited by ministermom

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~ Thank you everyone!

I will look for that book mom, thanx for the suggestion :)

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