Argonious Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 (edited) Darkest Friend…It seems as sometimes no one hears At times there is trouble and no one is near…The life one lived has gone and passed and newness has crept in at lastStrangers come familiar and new, even ones who you gave life too…Try, as you will to be there for all, giving up and facing the wall...Moving toiling setting the bounds, do they understand? Why do they look so confound…?Can they cope? Will they understand their fears?And can they understand what they can accomplish here?Questions asked and placed in you, I have heard your friend that’s new…I am different than you know, and see the things with eyes new and old.Try for understand as you have, remember the dark it carries the present and the pastFriends may change as seasons do…. But we who are of the times and places old and new will hold you up to him for always to be renewed….He is as we say always there, watching and helping and showing you his care…He sends to you one who understands and knows what is the master planWhen creeps in the sorrow of doubt, close your eyes and feel the dark…For in the night there I will be standing with him Father and Me, your Darkest Friends Do You See…?© Mwyncoop 2008 Edited October 5, 2008 by Argonious Dark Dante's Son Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 ~ I do enjoy your imagery {Just a suggestion? When doing centered poetry it helps if it's a design... that's the main reason for such Just a thought... I know a pain in the butt I am! } Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reverend Daniel Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 I enjoyed this one very much. It was suprisingly warm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Blackrose Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 I like this. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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