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colors falling into a depth

beyond that place I seek perhaps

clearly

misty shadows disguise it so

once created broken

from a dream

fall and fall and fall

golden leaves upon dark water

fall and fall and fall

from a dream

once created broken

misty shadows disguise it so

clearly

beyond that place I seek perhaps

colors falling into a depth

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I really like this one your getting the hang of bring out the imagery of thoughts you have, and the simplistic view is wonderful... keep it up :thumbu:

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~ Thank you!

I'll try to keep it simplistic for ya ;)

{Don't be tryin' to snot-ball me darlin'! Ya can't, I love ya too much :wub: }

It's a re-work of a piece I posted here before is all.

It's better now.

Or so as I see it.

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