Qryos Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 colors falling into a depth beyond that place I seek perhaps clearly misty shadows disguise it soonce created broken from a dreamfall and fall and fall golden leaves upon dark water fall and fall and fall from a dream once created broken misty shadows disguise it so clearly beyond that place I seek perhaps colors falling into a depth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argonious Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 I really like this one your getting the hang of bring out the imagery of thoughts you have, and the simplistic view is wonderful... keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted June 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 ~ Thank you! I'll try to keep it simplistic for ya {Don't be tryin' to snot-ball me darlin'! Ya can't, I love ya too much }It's a re-work of a piece I posted here before is all. It's better now.Or so as I see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RevRainbow Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 You already know I like your poems, Q. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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