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Qryos

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Laying broken in the soft rain,

So close but now forever out of reach...

What was once my dream is put out,

A candle wasted by a hurricane.

I'm left with this dark glowing pain,

A deep sea-monster rotting on the beach...

This mirror shattered with a shout,

So now my world is twisted and insane.

Wrapped and coiled within this chain

I am damned to eternally beseach...

Why and how this all came about,

My mind is yet now forever constrained.

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~ Thank you :wub:

{Our son is an ever-more inspiration :( }

Not really happy with the last 2 lines... It's why I like free-form more often.

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Very Nice Imagery, the inspiration is definably felt, in this poem. I love the aspect of the duality to it, in that of this world and the minds eye and world.... :thumbu:

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