lifeslittleuturns Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Gently, wet sky of rain on green grass bleeds.Thoughts flow down page alive in my dark rage.How know things be as I have eyes that see?For faith alone tell me which road to take. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 ~ "Gently, wet sky of rain on green grass bleeds." Very nice!Just wondering... Is there a specific reason you wrote it in that manner? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 ~ I just read your replies to my stuff & I appreciate your reading & comments very much! Thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lifeslittleuturns Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Iambic PentameterI was looking for a challenge.Short vowel, long vowel, short vowel, long vowel, short vowel, long vowel, short vowel, long vowel.It like putting a straight jacket on your tongue. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lifeslittleuturns Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 ~ I just read your replies to my stuff & I appreciate your reading & comments very much! Thank you Your welcome. I appreciate your talent, you appreciate my appreciation. Sounds like a symbiotic relationship. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 ~ Thanx Hon! Iambic pentameter... yeah, OK. Understood.Just wondering why in the world would you use such a strong imagery to do that in a short example?Hell, Shakespeare took fricken pages for one such image! You challenge yourself crazy-style... I like it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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