Qryos Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Death ~The measured steps come closer now,And still no fear.Still wishing to know Even now, all there is of LifeAnd Death.But time is short, And like the slow ticking of an ancient clockI die.Death holds no loneliness for me, No darkness.Just the nearing of an old friend,A light that's been with me for a long time Now.I will soon slip into peace and rest.Ah, here it comes!You've been a long time coming Death ~Welcome. Link to post Share on other sites
SilverRose Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 but beautifully written... Link to post Share on other sites
Bel Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 I don't find that sad at all, and I like it. Link to post Share on other sites
Call me Flower Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 I like it too. Link to post Share on other sites
Qryos Posted December 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 ~ I'm glad you like it! I didn't think it depressing when I wrote it either, but evidently others did.Almost got me committed.It was so much more cheerful than I had been feeling... Link to post Share on other sites
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