Qryos Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Death ~The measured steps come closer now,And still no fear.Still wishing to know Even now, all there is of LifeAnd Death.But time is short, And like the slow ticking of an ancient clockI die.Death holds no loneliness for me, No darkness.Just the nearing of an old friend,A light that's been with me for a long time Now.I will soon slip into peace and rest.Ah, here it comes!You've been a long time coming Death ~Welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverRose Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 but beautifully written... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bel Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 I don't find that sad at all, and I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Call me Flower Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 I like it too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted December 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 ~ I'm glad you like it! I didn't think it depressing when I wrote it either, but evidently others did.Almost got me committed.It was so much more cheerful than I had been feeling... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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