RevRainbow Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 I am thrilled with the responses received from my friends here on the forum; so far, my poetry has not caused heated debate!If you don't mind, and because of your encouragement, I would like to post more of my poems here. It is one of my passions, to present feeling and emotion common to all, that can be shared, through he written word. May you be blessed and encouraged by these offerings of mine. Thank you so very much.My EratoA sigh encased within a teardrop,One of many shed upon her leaving;Memories, each one, rapidly shownOn the silver screen of my mind,A documentary devoid of wordsOf times fleeting spent together.Even knowing beforehandThe duration of her short visitTo my world of joy and sorrow,Did not make the parting less painful;When she returned home to the stars,All I could do was look heavenward,Standing in the center of night;Perhaps a glimpse of twinkling eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phillipe Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 MAAAAAAAAaaannn, you are good. Thank you for posting these! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Fred Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bel Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 You made me cry......it's just beautiful. Made me miss my grandma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theresa Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 You are very gifted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirling Dervish Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 Nothin' to debate here RevRB. You're awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RevRainbow Posted October 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 Again, thank you for the the kind words. I've been writing since grade school (thank the Lord those early manuscripts had long disappeared) but really didn't start putting it all together until after I retired in 2000 and had some time to devote . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tannhaus Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 beautiful rev Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qryos Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 ~ You write beautifully! Truly, you do!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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