My Own Poem

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My soul once danced among the stars

where love is all you need.

And there they met my soul and yours

and hope began to breed.

And Oh a light began to shine,

the likes heaven rarely sees.

My love for you grew bright and strong,

but it was only me.

I screamed I danced I laughed I cried,

I got down on my knees.

I prayed to God that you'd be mine,

He gave no gurantees.

So now my soul shines all alone,

My heart lost in a dream.

My soulmate gone and darkness reigns,

Just wishing on moonbeams.

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~ Romantic poetry is harder to write than most think, huh?

You did a great job of it!

You deserved the ripped-off award.

Thanks folks!

I actually flubbed the first line of the last verse..its been ages since I wrote it. My orignal went

So now my soul dances all alone, not shines all alone.

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