Jason Wilkins

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  1. My cousin Rich and I created Rictameter in the early 1990's when we frequently engaged in regular poetic contest during the weekly meetings of our self-invented order, The Brotherhood of the Amarantos Mystery, which was inspired by the movie Dead Poet's Society. It's a cyclical form that represents life expanding from birth and returning to the beginning again at death. I enjoy centering the justification so that it makes a diamond or circular shape indicative of this continuity, however, it is not required of the form.

    The first examples of the rictameter form to be made public were submissions made by myself to the website www.shadowpoetry.com in 2000. These are the first two poems created by Rich and I, so many years ago.

    Satin

    As your lips are

    Pressed to mine as velvet

    Soft and full with rounded sweetness

    Two gentle petals alive with the night

    Misted in the summer beauty

    Of rains that shower love

    'Pon your lips of

    Satin

    submitted by Jason D. Wilkins

    Treasure

    Placed in your view

    So close but out of reach

    Torturous to all your senses

    For they each cry aloud to possess it

    Their desires forever unquenched

    For the things some want most

    They cannot have

    Treasure

    submitted by Richard W. Lunsford, Jr.

    I'd like to see what everyone else can do with the form. I have truly enjoyed reading so many gifted poets push this form towards perfection over the years. Its acceptance worldwide has been incredibly humbling and awe-inspiring as well.

  2. This is very appealing :) Though it strikes me as the kind of thing that is vulnerable to "we cannot understand God so simply" arguments. Regardless, I think it is a fine spiritual foundation and I'd like to hear more!

    It is very vulnerable to the argument because God cannot be understood simply. In order to understand God, you must first understand yourself and your place in the universe. While knowing God and experiencing God can be quite simple, understanding completely the full extent of a universal consciousness that is both Creator and Creation is a bit much for our limited minds to fathom. As soon as you name and describe an aspect of the whole, you simultaneously create the opposite. That is why it is said;

    The tao that can be told

    is not the eternal Tao.

    The name that can be named

    is not the eternal Name.

    The unnamable is the eternally real.

    Naming is the origin

    of all particular things.

    Free from desire, you realize the mystery.

    Caught in desire, you see only the manifestations.

    Yet mystery and manifestations

    arise from the same source.

    This source is called darkness.

    Darkness within darkness.

    The gateway to all understanding.

    ~Lao Tzu - Tao Te Ching - Stanza 1

    Peace, Love, and Good Journey, Brother,

    Jason

  3. Mi Hermano,

    Tu hablas verdad. Gracias por este regalo mas hermoso. :clap2:

    The only thing we need do is recognize God in everyone and love one another. Even the tortured soul that commits heinous and vicious crimes is created of God for a purpose. We can not always see the purpose for the failings of our self-centered fears and prejudices, but it is there regardless.

    "...And now abideth faith, hope, love, these three; but the greatest. of these is love"

    When we love God truly, we will love each other completely

    When we love each other completely, we love God fully.

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    James Oliver Rigney, Jr.

    October 17, 1948 - September 16, 2007

    "May you shelter in the palm of the Creator's hand, and may the last embrace of the mother welcome you home."

    a.k.a. Robert Jordan

    a.k.a. The Dragon

    His wife Harriet has all of his notes on paper or tape. She has edited his novels since the beginning and no one knows his world better than she. She will complete his masterpiece. All the more heartbreaking will be the scene where Rand must die upon the slopes of Mount Doom knowing that it is Harriet who must pen this tragic ending. She will have to say goodbye twice.

  5. While Up and Down I cruised the street

    No Strange Charm did I find

    Though I did look from Bottom feet

    To Top of bald-head mind.

    My Positrons all gave a spin

    My Muons all did dance

    And then my Gluons broke on in

    While Photons looked askance

    The Axions and Axinos all gathered in their nest

    It might be me

    (We'll wait and see)

    But I like Squarks the best

    The Graviscalar Tachyons

    Were tuning up their Dyons

    While several random Tardyons

    Pursued the speedy Luxons

    So as we see, a quark or three

    Can be so very stable

    And form a certain ordered Charm -

    Like a Periodic Table

    :thumbu::clap2::clap::notworthy::good::diepig:

  6. Tolkien and Robert Jordan are also great books, though I think I'm two behind in the Wheel of Time. Never read 3 and 4

    You must read The Dragon Reborn (aka Book Three) It's the best of the series. Come to think of it, Book Four is probably the next best because it shows us the Aiel society and it's culture in their native Waste. Fascinating people, the Aiel. Sort of like the Fremen of Dune.

  7. Terry Goodkind's- Magic Kingdom for Sale, Sold, great book.

    Flower

    Thats by Terry Brooks, not Terry Goodkind. Terry Goodkind wrote the Sword of Truthseries.

    My Top 5

    1. Robert Jordan's "Wheel of Time" series

    2. Anything by Tolkien

    3. Frank Herbert's "Dune"

    4. Jack Whyte's "Camulod Chronicles" (May not qualify as fantasy, more historical fiction, but still a GREAT read)

    5. J.K. Rowling's "Harry Potter" series

    8-)

    I don't think anything about a fictional character's (King Arthur) grandparents and a fictional city can be considered historical fiction. It's just fiction.

    Please, do pardon my ignorance. I meant no offense and I apologize if any categorical laws were broken. I meant to say that the story is a great read, fiction as it is.